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China Face

Is she not a pretty doll?
The one that no one wants.
Yelled at purely for her tears
Receiver of their taunts.

Stuck there on a broken shelf
No friendly arm for need of help
A picture but not picturesque
Now alone she's such a mess

How dare you break her china face
She's damned enough without her grace
She cries out loud to no avail
Her cheeks are white; her face is pale
Her tears are cold; as hard as stone
Upon that shelf she weeps alone.

She does not want to die, you know
But she doesn't want to live
Her talents that she has to show
She can no longer give

Coz another pretty doll she knows
Has everybody's praise
Why is she talentless
She means not what she says

How dare you break her china face
She's damned enough without her grace
She cries out loud to no avail
Her cheeks are white; her face is pale
Her tears are cold; as hard as stone
Upon that shelf she weeps alone.

Do you know you're breaking her?
She had such a pretty smile?
She tries so hard to conceal tears
She weeps just like a child.
All alone on forsaken's shelf
She waits for somebody's praise
They critize those fragile eyes
She'll wait 'till no more days

How dare you break her china face
She's damned enough without her grace
She cries out loud to no avail
Her cheeks are white; her face is pale
Her tears are cold; as hard as stone
Upon that shelf she weeps alone.
©2004-2009 ~puwen
:iconpuwen:

Author's Comments

She's the china doll that no one wants, stuck on a discounted shelf, outshone by another. She's me.

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:iconfacelessmaster3003:
*huggles tightly adding this to favorites*

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Union Official: Excuse me sir but we are now into overtime and union rules specifically state-
Cobra Commander: The only union they should be concerned with issss the onessss between their headssss and their shoulderssss!
Union Official: Duhhh-yes-sir!
:iconamusanteart:
i love that poem. its just .. great. you write VERY well . keep it up!

*cole
:iconchloe-brody:
OHhhh, this is wonderful. Fantastic. Brilliant. :+favlove:

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She comes in colours everywhere, she combs her hair, she's like a rainbow...

I love Melbourne.
:iconpuwen:
Thank you very much Chloe, I'll play you the music sometime. Big hugs!

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:iconpuwen:
Thanks! Good to meet you btw lol :D

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:iconcupcakes-r-yum:
I think I'm gunna cry! It's so sad- the little doll that nobody wants... I am so adding this to favourites... it's fantastic. How do you do it?

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~ ...On the stage that you shone, where the sun did become you... ~
:iconfacelessmaster3003:
yer welcomes^^

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Union Official: Excuse me sir but we are now into overtime and union rules specifically state-
Cobra Commander: The only union they should be concerned with issss the onessss between their headssss and their shoulderssss!
Union Official: Duhhh-yes-sir!
:iconchloe-brody:
No worries! :D

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She comes in colours everywhere, she combs her hair, she's like a rainbow...

I love Melbourne.

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